I want to see what happens if I don't" - Neila Rey
I'm not one to speak about feeling's- they make me cringe and want to curl up and possibly vomit haha! However with poems I enjoy putting feeling into them (and a lot of it!) It's good to show feeling's in which ever way you feel comfortable and for me that's in rhyme! My next poem is about school and some of the feelings that came along with it. My experience at school was not the best so apologies if this has no relations to you but I hope it's a good read either way. Enjoy and once again let me know what you think!
The Ocean's School
Walking one by one in line
All of me I must refine
To succeed is to shine
I cannot glow in these conditions
Myself is my only competition
Told I am not trying
But miss I am complying
It’s weakness I am hiding.
Failure suffocates me, like I’m lost beneath the oceans pit
With all these expectations I cannot fit.
Today I no longer walk that wave
Today I am standing brave
Surround myself with the ocean’s charm
Watch the waves flow, now so calm.
Today I can shine, today is mine.
Thank you for reading.
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